You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph given illustrates the average temperatures of three main cities in each month. In general, All cities' condition figures witnessed a wide-range change in values.

Furthermore

, among the three,

Dubai

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Dubai's

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temperature recorded the highest

degree

in

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apply

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most of the time. In the first seven-month period, it was clear that the monthly climate

degree

Celsius of Dubai and Paris both shared a similar upward trend. The former significantly rise from the beginning

of

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approximately 18

degree

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degrees

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to 35

degree

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degrees

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in July, reaching

the

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a

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peak at over 35

degree

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degrees

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in the

followed

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following

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month before it gradually dipped to more than 20

degree

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degrees

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in

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at

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the end.

Likewise

, the latter,

seen

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has seen

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a tremendous fourfold climb.

However

, it rapidly declined in the

last

four months.

In Contrast

, Sydney's average monthly

degree

showed a downward trend in the same first seven-month period. After the figures sharply fell to its bottom point, lower than 15

degree

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degrees

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, it made a rebound, reaching nearly the same level as the beginning

in

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of

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January at above 20

degree

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degrees

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.