The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plan for its development.
The two maps of the
centre
of the towns of Islip give information about the Use synonyms
city
.
currently and in the future. Use synonyms
Overall
, a lot of modifications can be observed during the forecast development.
First of all, Linking Words
according to
the current Linking Words
map
the Add a comma
,map
centre
is
close
Ibo a countryside. A main
road deserves houses, a school, several shops and a park. Looking more closely at the map predicting the future development of the Use synonyms
city
, a lot of modifications can be observed. The size of the Use synonyms
centre
will increase Use synonyms
in
an oval shape; Change preposition
to
therefore
the countryside will disappear. Linking Words
Moreover
, the single road will be replaced by a bigger Linking Words
dual carriageway
. A pedestrian way will deserve the central area. New houses will be built with new facilities Add a hyphen
dual-carriageway
such
as a bus station and Linking Words
a
parking. The shops will be grouped in a shopping mall. The next point is the garden area which will be smaller. As the Remove the article
apply
city
will have more people the school will be bigger.
Use synonyms
To sum up
, between the actual map of Islip town Linking Words
centre
and the future planned development, a lot of modifications are predicted. On the one Use synonyms
hand
the Add a comma
,hand
city
will be bigger with more facilities. Use synonyms
On the other
Linking Words
hand
the park will be reduced and the countryside will disappear. The Add a comma
,hand
city
will have changed a great deal.Use synonyms
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