The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make cmparisons where relevant

The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make cmparisons where relevant
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The given maps illustrate an industrialized sector in the town of Norbition, and proposed redevelopment scheme.
Overall
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it is clear that
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the town will be transformed from an industrial zone to a residential site, supported by housing and several facilities.
According to
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the first map, the city mainly comprises factories scattered around a roundabout and on either side of an eastern street.
However
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, all of these will be demolished and replaced by housing and other buildings. In the future, shops and a medical centre will be built near the south of the original roundabout
while
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a new road will be paved to the northeast, with houses situated
at the end
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. On the eastern street, there will be a park on the middle-top side and a school at its edge
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other accommodation. Outside the city, there will be a bridge across a river, with apartments on the other side, causing farmland to move east.
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, a second ring road will be constructed on the highway connected to the original one.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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