Modern technology is now very common in most workplaces. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

The most important thing in
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work place
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workplace
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is
technology
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a technology
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which
is became
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essential in daily life. In my opinion, it makes
work
easier and faster than previously and
Technology
can certainly make life effortless, but it's important to remember to disconnect and enjoy the present moment.
Although
,
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technology
has
effected
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the environment and brought
to
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many benefits, to illustrate, It has changed the way how
people
work
, which
is became
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faster.
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example
, in the
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they needed
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a lot of employees just to account
money
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for
company
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the company
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.
However
, now and because of
technology
,
work
became much more easier and effortless by using modern devices,
such
as
laptop
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laptops
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, pc,
scanner
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scanners
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and to name a few.
In other words
,
technology
provide
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flexibility in
work
which means it made
job
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easy.
For
example
, it supports remote working, online trading etc. Despite of benefits of
technology
, It
also
can lead to another side if
people
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to
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much on It. To demonstrate, depending on
technology
causes
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unemployment rate. Because
,
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globalization has developed more and more.
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artificial intelligence
have
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the potential to replace certain jobs and robots for industries.
This
is because
,
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they are faster and
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more accuracy
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accuracy
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in
work
which can lead to displacement and
decrease
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in demand for certain types of employment.
Finally
,
another
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drawbacks come out
technology
relying
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is
failures
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failure
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inspite
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in spite
of advancement.
Technology
is not infallible.
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example
, technical glitches, system failures or power outages
which
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can disrupt daily activities and services that heavily rely on
technology
.
Such
as communication networks or financial
transaction
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,
while
technology
has changed the way how
people
work
.
Furthermore
, still there are
people
who are technophobe which means they are terrified of
technology
. In conclusion,
technology
has
huge
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impact
especially
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on
work
, which can guide to
face
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disadvantages. If
people
use
technology
wisely and
for
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essential ways, the world would be magnificent.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • efficiency
  • productivity
  • software applications
  • high-speed internet
  • communication
  • collaboration
  • geographical boundaries
  • remote work
  • flexibility
  • work-life balance
  • skill gaps
  • job displacement
  • automation
  • artificial intelligence
  • dependency
  • security risks
  • data breaches
  • cyber attacks
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