The line graph compares the average number of people in the UK traveling daily by car, bus and train over a period of 60 years.
The given line graph illustrates the average
number
of UK commuters
using car
, Fix the agreement mistake
cars
bus
or trains Fix the agreement mistake
buses
train
to travel over a 60-year period, starting from 1970.
Overall
, it is evident that the number
of British people using cars car
as well as
trains Correct word choice
and train
train
has increased gradually during the period from 1970 to 2030, Fix the agreement mistake
trains
whereas
the figure for bus
users
has fallen steadily. Moreover
, it can be seen that car
is the most popular means of transport used by British commuters
for travelling.
In 1970, approximately 5 million
UK commuters
travelled by car
on a daily basis. On the other hand
, there were about 4 million
bus
users
and 2 million
train
users
. Furthermore
, the number
of car
and train
users
continued to rise until it leveled
levelled out at 7 Change the spelling
levelled
million
and 3 million
respectively in 2000. Nevertheless
, there was a small drop of nearly 0,5 million
in the number
of bus
users
. Eventually, it reached the same level as train
users
did in 2015.
In 2030, the number
of British people using cars car
is expected to reach almost 9 million
. In addition
, the number
of train
users
is also
predicted to rise to nearly 5 million
. In contrast
, buses are anticipated to be the less popular choice among UK commuters
with only 3 million
users
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, commuters, car, bus, train, users, million with synonyms.
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