While you were studying in the UK, you made friends with John Blaire who was one of your course tutors. He is coming to your country an international conference. You want to invite him to stay at your place and spend some time together. Write a letter to him. In your letter, • Ask him about the conference • Invite him to stay at your place • Suggest some things you can do together

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Hi Frank, How are you? It’s cool to hear that you’ll

finally

visit my country next month. It would be great to see you again and spend some time hanging out, and you’re welcome to stay with us. You said in your message you’ll be attending an international conference. Is that the Climate Change Summit in Seoul? It’s been all over the news for days here but I haven’t been paying much attention, to be honest. Would you like to stay at my place

while

you’re in Surrey? I have a 2-bedroom apartment and my young son can sleep with my wife and me. It would be no problem for us and we’d have more time to catch up. We can

also

show you around the city in your spare time. Surrey is a sprawling place and there are loads of places to hang out like the Seoul Tower and Namdaemoon Market. Anyway, tell me what you think and hopefully, I’ll see you soon. Hope to hear from you soon. All the best Harpal

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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8 paragraphs

174 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them.

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