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While you were studying in the UK, you made friends with John Blaire who was one of your course tutors. He is coming to your country an international conference. You want to invite him to stay at your place and spend some time together. Write a letter to him. In your letter, • Ask him about the conference • Invite him to stay at your place • Suggest some things you can do together

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Hi Frank, How are you? It’s cool to hear that you’ll
finally
 visit my country next month. It would be great to see you again and spend some time hanging out, and you’re welcome to stay with us. You said in your message you’ll be attending an international conference. Is that the Climate Change Summit in Seoul? It’s been all over the news for days here but I haven’t been paying much attention, to be honest. Would you like to stay at my place
while
 you’re in Surrey? I have a 2-bedroom apartment and my young son can sleep with my wife and me. It would be no problem for us and we’d have more time to catch up. We can
also
 show you around the city in your spare time. Surrey is a sprawling place and there are loads of places to hang out like the Seoul Tower and Namdaemoon Market. Anyway, tell me what you think and hopefully, I’ll see you soon. Hope to hear from you soon. All the best Harpal
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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