The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
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The process gives us information about the evolution of water on our planet, with its different stages.
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, we can see that water always follows the same movements. It changes its physical state twice;
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, we have evaporation, and
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precipitation.
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, we can continue to have H2O to consume. In evaporation, the ocean plays a crucial role; in fact, it contributes 80% of the total H2O
vapor
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in the air. All
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vapor
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evaporates because of its high temperature, and
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the condensing
vapor
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makes a cloud; at
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state, it is again in a liquid state, ready to go back down. After a cloud has been made, precipitation takes place;
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, it rains. Small drops fall on the mountains or in the lakes; those that precipitate on the mountains go down below the ground to arrive at the ocean and
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restart the same process.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • evaporation
  • transpiration
  • condensation
  • precipitation
  • aquifers
  • percolation
  • surface runoff
  • replenishing
  • infiltrates
  • atmosphere
  • vapor
  • liquid
  • cycle
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