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The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart demonstrates the rate of testing animals in six
catagories
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categories
:
rabbits
, hamsters, dogs, pigs, primates and sheep in the U.S.
overall
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,
it is clear that
 the rate of
rabbits
which
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use
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 for animal testing is overwhelming.
Moreover
, the rate of sheep testing is the lowest. Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that the ratio of
rabbits
 testing is 38.7% for using medical things.
In addition
,
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the hamsters
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hamsters
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 ratio is 27.7%, which means the second rank for testing animals. Another point to note is that pigs and primates are almost the same percentage
to
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of
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 9.3 and 9% in
U.S
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the U.S
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. That means that people who scientist
do
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testing percentage to pigs and primates are lower than people who scientist do testing ratio to
rabbits
 and hamsters.
Furthermore
,
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the dogs
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dogs
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dog
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 testing proportion is 10.2%
for
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almost the third rank in
U.S.
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the U.S.
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Lastly
,
sheep’s
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the sheep’s
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 testing percentage is the lowest in the rank.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rabbits with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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