You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Sara, I am writing to confirm that
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coming to Canada next week for my
further
study.
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going to study business management course, which in tow-years diploma. My college sends me an e-mail
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eligible to work part-time, which is a great option for managing all my expenses there by myself. In
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,I use to pay 1000$ per year so
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need to job part-time during my study . In these matters,
l
need your help
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to find part-time work because
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a now in Canada and
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do not know anything there. You live there for a long- time ago. Can you suggest the types of job available there
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I hope you understand and spend some time for me to find a job. With regards, Alaa
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Educational aspirations
  • Work experience
  • Financial independence
  • Resume (or CV)
  • Local job market
  • International student
  • Legal requirements
  • Student work permit
  • Employment trends
  • Time management
  • Networking
  • A part-time position
  • Balance studies and work
  • Job hunting strategies
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