The graph below gives information about the percentages of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020,with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The given graph highlights information about the portion of the population in four diverse Asian territories who lived in conurbations from 1970 to 2020,and
also
it predicts ratios for the coming years; 2030 as well as
2040.
Overall
, it can be seen that there were upward trends in all mentioned years with the exception of Thailand and Philippines
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the Philippines
where
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which
fluctuated
trends in the first half of the period. Another striking point is that all cities are about to have increasing figures for the far future.
Looking at the details, Indonesia was the least popular city for residing in 1970 with 13% but Wrong verb form
fluctuating
then
its percentage increased dramatically and hit a peak with
55% in 2022 and it is going to reach approximately 60% in 2040; it means it would be ranked second. Followingly, the portion of Thailand started at under 20% and went up 29% Change preposition
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while
its amount remained stable by 2020 it is about to improve 45
% by 2040 and will have the lowest ratio among citizens.
If we look at Change preposition
by 45
Philippines'
portion, it commenced at 33% which was the highest amount but Correct article usage
the Philippines'
then
it fluctuated during the whole period and stopped at 44% ; its prediction displays the
percentage of 50% by 2040 which would make it ranked third. Ultimately, the ratio of Correct article usage
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Malaysa
embarked on 30% and in 1990 reached 45% Correct your spelling
Malaysia
and
it rocketed Correct word choice
apply
around
80% in 2022 and it will hit a peak Change preposition
to around
with
82% in 2030.Change preposition
at
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