The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the details of animal testing in the U.S., tested with
rabbits
, hamsters, dogs, pigs, primates, and
sheep
. The most popular
species
are
rabbits
;
sheep
hold the smallest amount of
this
statistic.
To begin
with,
rabbits
share the highest portion of the test, accounting for 38.7 %.
Then
, the percentage of
rabbits
is higher than the second common
species
hamster, by roughly ten per cent. As for the concentration of dogs, pigs, and primates, both have a similar position, which both hold for approximately 10 per cent of the total. Surprisingly, the ratio of
sheep
only shares 5 per cent of the total proportion, which is only a tenth of the
rabbits
.
To sum up
,
rabbits
are the majority of
species
used for animal testing in the United States. In comparison,
sheep
is the least popular animal among all the
species
. Interestingly, there are three animals that made up a similar percentage of the data.
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