The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
here is the illustration of a bar graph displaying the
number
of adults who participated in various kinds of sports
in one single area, in the years 1997 and 2017. the different sports
are mentioned along the horizontal line and the number
of adults in thousands is on the vertical side of the graph.
firstly
, we can see that tennis has been dominating to be the most played game in the years 1997 and as well as
2017. secondly
, football and rugby have the same level in both years. golf and swimming with a slighter difference have maintained a static level of nearly 30-35 thousand. finally
, basketball has a gradual increase from 9 to 22 thousand participation of adults whereas
cricket has predominantly decreased to a very low number
of people participation.
to conclude
, we can summarise that few major sports
like tennis football and rugby sports
have maintained the same number
of participationSubmitted by yuvameenu9 on
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