The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
here is the illustration of a bar graph displaying the
number
of adults who participated in various kinds of
sports
in one single area, in the years 1997 and 2017. the different
sports
are mentioned along the horizontal line and the
number
of adults in thousands is on the vertical side of the graph.
firstly
, we can see that tennis has been dominating to be the most played game in the years 1997 and
as well as
2017.
secondly
, football and rugby have the same level in both years. golf and swimming with a slighter difference have maintained a static level of nearly 30-35 thousand.
finally
, basketball has a gradual increase from 9 to 22 thousand participation of adults
whereas
cricket has predominantly decreased to a very low
number
of people participation.
to conclude
, we can summarise that few major
sports
like tennis football and rugby
sports
have maintained the same
number
of participation
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • participation rate
  • increase/decrease in numbers
  • trend
  • decade
  • relatively stable
  • major sports
  • potential reasons
  • contributing factors
  • public interest
  • comparison
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