The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
here is the illustration of a bar graph displaying the
number
Use synonyms
of adults who participated in various kinds of
sports
Use synonyms
in one single area, in the years 1997 and 2017. the different
sports
Use synonyms
are mentioned along the horizontal line and the
number
Use synonyms
of adults in thousands is on the vertical side of the graph.
firstly
Linking Words
, we can see that tennis has been dominating to be the most played game in the years 1997 and
as well as
Linking Words
2017.
secondly
Linking Words
, football and rugby have the same level in both years. golf and swimming with a slighter difference have maintained a static level of nearly 30-35 thousand.
finally
Linking Words
, basketball has a gradual increase from 9 to 22 thousand participation of adults
whereas
Linking Words
cricket has predominantly decreased to a very low
number
Use synonyms
of people participation.
to conclude
Linking Words
, we can summarise that few major
sports
Use synonyms
like tennis football and rugby
sports
Use synonyms
have maintained the same
number
Use synonyms
of participation
Submitted by yuvameenu9 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, sports with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • participation rate
  • increase/decrease in numbers
  • trend
  • decade
  • relatively stable
  • major sports
  • potential reasons
  • contributing factors
  • public interest
  • comparison
What to do next:
Look at other essays: