Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter •explain the reasons for the noise •apologise • describe what action you will take

#neighbours #•explain #noise #•apologise #action

Dear Adam, I'm writing to you that complain about your

music

sound. I'm a neighbour of your apartment I know you came recently and you don't know who is living in

this

building. I think you came from another country. I can understand your situation and I know people have some hobbies. your hobby may be listening to

music

. But as you know if the noise is come out it will be bothering for everyone who lives in the building.

on the other hand

, we are working people and we are coming home at night and we need good peaceful sleep time. if you start

music

in the evening to midnight we can't have a good sleep and I'm suffering from a headache in the morning. My daughter

also

not sleeping because of your

music

. I hope you can understand our situation and I will suggest to you if you really want to listen to

music

please listen to it in the evening and switch off it at 8 PM. please kindly consider about our problem and do the needful. thanks Randima

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The Closing

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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

182 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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