You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear………….,

#minutes #friend #house #pet #holiday #contact #instructions #care #household #duties #addresses #dear…………

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It’s really appreciable for you to accept my invitation to look after my

house

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and pet when I am away

for

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vacation. I will be flying off to India on 20 July for a week and you can contact me via my

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number at 65 97875214 as I will be using the same number over there. In case

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you are unable to reach me via text msg, you can pass the message to my sis Gayathiri at 91 78494949 who will be

also

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staying with me in Chennai. As I am flying off on

20th

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Morning, you may come to my

house

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on the 19th

July

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of July

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night itself to get some rest. I will be passing a set of spare keys to you including the

mail box

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key.

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I have a pet dog Jimmy who is 3 months old. He is still a baby so I do not tie him up. He is a golden retriever and they are quite friendly with everyone. You may help to feed him every 4 hrs and his milk is being kept in the bottles compartment in the fridge. The bottle bears the name

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Jimmy for

your

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easy identification. Other than that, you can let him play in the

house

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and he might chew some of the furniture. That would not be an issue for me as I will be replacing new furniture soon. Jane, please help to treat yourselves with cakes and pastries in the fridge. I will top up on the 19th

July

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of July

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for you. When it comes to household duties, I appreciate

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it if

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you can mop the hall and 2 rooms daily in the morning as Jimmy might pee here and there as he is not toilet trained yet. Thank you for assisting me in

this

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. You may help to iron some of the washed clothes in the laundry basket near the kitchen balcony. I would like to extend my advance thanks to you for taking care of my

house

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as well as

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my pet. I wish

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you a pleasant stay and see you on the 27 July.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

352 words

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