The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Please summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart bar demonstrates the
number
of sales
from five
most popular mobile Correct article usage
the five
phones
manufacturers in the world during the period of 2019-2013.
Change the noun form
phone
It is clear that
Nokia
was the leading vendor of global mobile phones
Change the noun form
phone
sales
in 2009 and 2011. However
, Samsung
took the leading place as its sales
of handsets rose largely in 2013.
In 2009, Nokia
sold 450 millions
mobile Fix the agreement mistake
million
phones
globally, which was almost 200 millions
larger than the Change to singular
million
number
Samsung
sold, 250 millions
. In 2011, Change to singular
million
Nokia
saw a slight decrease in sales
while
the amount of Samsung
phones
increased by about 100 millions
in the world. In 2013, the Change to singular
million
sales
of Nokia
fell by around 200 millions
, which was similar to the increased Change to singular
million
sales
number
of Samsung
around the world. As a results
, Correct the article-noun agreement
result
Samsung
became the most popular mobile phone manufacturer in 2013, with its
450 Correct pronoun usage
apply
millions
Change to singular
million
sales
.
As for the other three popular mobile phone vendors, they were Apple, LG, and ZTE. Globally, the number
of Apple phones
sold increased dramatically, from around 25 millions
units in 2009 to about 150 Change to singular
million
millions
in 2013. Change to singular
million
However
, during the same period, the worldwide sales
of ZTE only saw a slight increase (i.e., it increased to more than 50 millions
in 2013) and LG declined from around 130 Change to singular
million
millions
in 2019 to around 70 Change to singular
million
millions
in 2013.Change to singular
million
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