Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, the
change
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world temperature is a controversial issue. Change preposition
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While
it is believed that many Linking Words
businesses
could be destroyed by fixing global warming, I side with those who feel that solving Use synonyms
this
problem is a chance for many Linking Words
businesses
.
On the one hand, it is argued that addressing Use synonyms
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climate
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change
could make some Use synonyms
people
unemployed. Those in favour of Use synonyms
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idea state that one of the main sources of global warming is big factories using fossil as a source of Linking Words
energy
to make their products. Use synonyms
For example
, Linking Words
everyday
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As a result
, by banning the use of Linking Words
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kind of fuel, a large number of factories could be closed, and many Linking Words
people
working in Use synonyms
this
field have to look for a new job. Linking Words
Moreover
, they claim that many Linking Words
car
drivers could lose their jobs since old Use synonyms
cars
have an important role in air pollution and increasing dioxide carbon Use synonyms
into
the atmosphere. Change preposition
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Thus
, scrapping old Linking Words
cars
could incur not only some Use synonyms
low income
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also
could disrupt Linking Words
people
’s transportation.
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However
, efforts to tackle the Linking Words
climate
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change
obstacles Use synonyms
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have
capability
to flourish many Change the article
the capability
businesses
. New sources of Use synonyms
energy
which are considered safe for the environment will be more popular, and by increasing the demands, the suppliers have to expand their Use synonyms
businesses
to provide Use synonyms
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need of Change preposition
for the
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, many new power plants might be built Linking Words
which
work with renewable Correct word choice
that
energy
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such
as wind. In fact, many Linking Words
people
can get a job in Use synonyms
this
new development. Linking Words
Furthermore
, Linking Words
climate
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change
reforms could have a positive effect on the Use synonyms
car
industry. Use synonyms
Car
companies could use Use synonyms
a
new technology to make electric Remove the article
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cars
which are more efficient and less pollutant for the environment. Since Use synonyms
people
try to have a role in improving environmental issues, they are more interested in buying electric Use synonyms
cars
which leads to more success for Use synonyms
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business.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
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climate
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change
reforms might shut down some old building industries or Use synonyms
car
companies, Use synonyms
it
could succeed Correct pronoun usage
they
businesses
using renewable and electric Use synonyms
energy
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, on balance, I believe reforms Linking Words
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resulting
climate
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change
efforts have positive impacts on Use synonyms
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