The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.
The chart below represents data about GDP in the United Kingdom between 1992 and 2000 comparing two workplaces IT
industry
and service
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the service
industry
. Looking from an overall
perspective, it could be seen that IT
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the IT
industry
grew dramatically from 1992 to 2000.
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, it clear
that UK's GDP depended more Add a missing verb
is clear
from
IT services. As a matter of fact Change preposition
on
that
IT Correct determiner usage
the
industry
produced more money for Britain's economy than service
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the service
industry
. Hovewer
, in the particular years the proportions were almost the same between these two services.
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However
To begin
with, in 1992 IT
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the IT
industry
had 6 percent
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per cent
while
service
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the service
industry
had 4%. In the next four years
proportions of Add a comma
,years
two
industries rose gradually. Correct article usage
the two
Nevertheless
, after 1996 the proportion of IT
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the IT
industry
increased significantly. In
contrast
percentage of Add a comma
,contrast
services
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the services
industry
continued to grew
progressively.
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grow
IT
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the IT
industry
doubled from 6% to 15%. Similarly
, with service
industry
from 4% to 8%Submitted by slobodanatol83 on
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