In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
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human
population, there is Correct article usage
the human
a
increase in the number of elderly Change the article
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people
. In Britain, Use synonyms
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the governmenthas
governmenthas
to take care of old Correct your spelling
government has
people
in their retirement Use synonyms
age
. In my opinion, Use synonyms
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government
has to look after them. In the following paragraph,I am going to delve into the reasons behind Add an article
the government
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.
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with, everyone is obliged to pay taxes from an early Linking Words
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until they retire. If we consider all the taxes Use synonyms
what
we pay in our entire life, it is a huge amount of Correct word choice
that
money
we pay to the Use synonyms
government
. It is paid for the development of society and Use synonyms
people
who help in Use synonyms
everyday
growth of Correct article usage
the everyday
country
. Add an article
the country
a country
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government
officials should spend a big chunk of Use synonyms
money
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onold
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on old
age
nursing. Use synonyms
For example
, I remember my grandfather, he used to spend a lot of Linking Words
money
on taxes Use synonyms
in
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at
his
youthful Change the word
a
age
. As he is retired, he needs additional medical and emotional support from his similar Use synonyms
once
or nurses and nursing houses are places where he can get Correct your spelling
ones
company
of similar Add an article
the company
a company
people
and extra medical support. Use synonyms
Therefore
, the Linking Words
governmentmust
start looking after them in Correct your spelling
government must
people
’s60s.
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Furthermore
, with the growth of family members, there are a greater number of Linking Words
infant
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infants
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birth. Wrong verb form
taking
People
have to take care of newborn child upbringing. They already have a huge burden and financial pressure. Use synonyms
For example
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spendings
. He rarely Fix the agreement mistake
spending
getschance
to spend Correct your spelling
gets a chance
money
on himself or my grandfather’s medical expenditures. For that reason, I believe Use synonyms
family
should not pay for the elderly Correct article usage
the family
people
nursing.
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To conclude
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although
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people
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requirement
and emotional support is something Fix the agreement mistake
requirements
government
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