Violent TV-shows and aggressive video games should be banned on governmental level. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that vicious TV programmes and hostile video

games

should be prohibited by

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governments. In my opinion,

this

is the best thing to do as

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to

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criminalality

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criminality

in the younger generation.

To begin

with, shows made for TV and electronic

games

are made based on

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popularity among the crowd.

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is because

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people used to vent their frustrations in their social

life

playing

games

and watching shows. Nowadays the

games

and shows become more violent as the discrimination in

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society

increases

and most of them

sees

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themselves in the characters in the shows and

games

and divert their anger to the other characters in these platforms which they cannot do in real

life

.

For example

in

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a survey conducted by an online platform states that 70% of

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people

likes

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to play a boxing video game to reduce their anger

on

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their bosses.

These

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scenario is dangerous as these

these

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behaviours will eventually

becomes

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a pattern in their real

life

.

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, these

type

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of contents are dangerous for children as they might not understand how abnormal it is. As the children

sees

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these kind

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of shows and

games

they might

thing

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think

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these are normal behaviours and will become part of their

life

without understanding the dangers of it.

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instance

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a survey conducted by American Psychological Association among students points

that

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the kids are

more

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leaning towards

games

like Bulletstorm which are very violent in nature.

Hence

it would be very useful for parents if these violent products are banned

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the government level. In conclusion,

eventhough

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even though

these shows and

games

are made as part of their popularity it could never deny the fact that it

increases

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criminality in

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society and

also

increases

the chance that the future generation might behave as in the characters of these shows and

games

as it is normal.