Violent TV-shows and aggressive video games should be banned on governmental level. Do you agree or disagree?

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should be prohibited by

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governments. In my opinion,

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is the best thing to do as

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to

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increases

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criminalality

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criminality

in the younger generation.

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with, shows made for TV and electronic

games

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are made based on

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popularity among the crowd.

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people used to vent their frustrations in their social

life

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playing

games

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and watching shows. Nowadays the

games

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and shows become more violent as the discrimination in

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society

increases

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and most of them

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themselves in the characters in the shows and

games

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and divert their anger to the other characters in these platforms which they cannot do in real

life

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a survey conducted by an online platform states that 70% of

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people

likes

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to play a boxing video game to reduce their anger

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their bosses.

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scenario is dangerous as these

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behaviours will eventually

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a pattern in their real

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.

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, these

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of contents are dangerous for children as they might not understand how abnormal it is. As the children

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these kind

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of shows and

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they might

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think

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these are normal behaviours and will become part of their

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without understanding the dangers of it.

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instance

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a survey conducted by American Psychological Association among students points

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out that

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the kids are

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leaning towards

games

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like Bulletstorm which are very violent in nature.

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it would be very useful for parents if these violent products are banned

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the government level. In conclusion,

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even though

these shows and

games

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are made as part of their popularity it could never deny the fact that it

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criminality in

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society and

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increases

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the chance that the future generation might behave as in the characters of these shows and

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as it is normal.