The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005.

The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005.
The given picture illustrates many developments taking place in an
area
named Youngsville in New Zealand over 25 years from 1980 to 2005. As can be seen from the map, Youngsville had undergone various drastic changes from a residential
area
to an industrial district. Many new infrastructures had been constructed,
such
as a stadium, a
park
, and many modern buildings. Regarding the north side of the map, in 1980, there was a
park
surrounded by many trees, and a hospital was constructed to the southwest of the
park
. 25 years later, the
park
and the hospital remained unchanged;
however
, some of the trees were chopped down for the new parking
area
. At the same time, many residences located in the northeast of the
area
were replaced by a new stadium and a parking
area
. In the south of Youngsville, in the past, most of the land was for the erection of houses and woodland, but in 2005, these houses were demolished for new infrastructures, skyscrapers, factories, and warehouses,
for example
. The railway (vị trí cụ thể?) had been expanded to the north of the
area
;
moreover
, there was
also
a new marina in the east of the
area
.
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