The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The line chart illustrates information about the average no. of people and the variety of street food that was eaten by the younger generation of Australia over the period of twenty-five years.
Overall
, it can be seen that there was a significant increase on account of eating Hamburger and Pizza in the span of twenty-five years, Linking Words
whereas
the consumption of Fish and Chips decreased dramatically.
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Accordingly
, In the year 1975, seafood and Chips were Linking Words
initially
eaten by most people which started at a peak of 100 times. Linking Words
While
western food like hamburgers and Pizza were at zero. Eventually, the consumption of normal fast food soured to forty times per year over Linking Words
this
long period.
Gradually, the no. of students eating Pizza Linking Words
also
rose to 80 numbers per annum in the country. Linking Words
Finally
, there is a huge difference of 60 times compared to both types of foods.Linking Words
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