The illustrations show how chocolate is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The image illustrates the steps by which
chocolate
is made.
Overall
, the production of
chocolate
takes 10 steps, one half of which takes place on a farm
while
the other half at a factory.
Chocolate
is made from
cocoa
beans
grown in countries like S. America, Africa and Indonesia.
At the first stage
of production, ripe
cocoa
pods containing
cocoa
beans
are harvested. Having been harvested, pods are cracked open manually with a machete to extract white
cocoa
beans
. These
beans
are
then
wrapped with large leaves to be fermented. Once fermented,
beans
are spread over a flat surface and left in the open to dry in the sun. Only after being dried are
beans
placed in large sacks of 64 kg and loaded onto a lorry or train for delivery to a factory. Upon reaching the factory,
beans
are roasted in an oven at a temperature of 350 degrees Celsius. Roasted
beans
can
then
be crushed inside a grinder where the
beans
’ outer shell is removed and the inner part is kept.
Finally
, the inner part of the
chocolate
beans
is pressed in a pressing machine to obtain liquid
chocolate
.
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