Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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that

due to

the increasing

owenrship

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ownership

of cars rapidly and having more than one car in a family, many

cities

are facing the problem of

traffic

jam

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jams

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. There are several

reaspns

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reasons

for

such

a

sitution

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situation

, and

also

a few visible influences too. Both

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aspects are explained in the following paragraphs Discussing the reasons, the most common one is having the bad conditions of public transport in the

cities

that force them to think about buying

new

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car.

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is because many

cities

still have the

less

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fewer

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busses

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buses

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available

that

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and

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passagers

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passengers

have to wait in some cases more

that

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a

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hour if they miss a

buss

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. A good example

for

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this

is Collingwood. People can travel fast than buss on cycle. It is

also

true that they prefer getting new

owenrship

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ownership

of

car

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cars

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that cause

big

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traffic

jam

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jams

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in

cities

. The mentioned reasons have some solutions too. The foremost reason is seen on

this

traffic

problem is providing more busses and making

new

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railway track that can

incurge

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encourage

the

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teenagers to choose

the

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pulic

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public

transport over private

one

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ones

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.

Moreover

, making new

opportunites

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opportunities

of

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jobs near

to

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the resedenational area

that

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would

decrase

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decrease

the need

of

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travel. Adding to

this

, shopping centres can

also

be built near

to

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the living areas.

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and

voical

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voice

voiced

my opinion, I would say that focusing on the need that

make

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people

to

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travel

everyday

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from far away from their homes is the most ideal way to deal with

this

situtaion

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situation

. In

big

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picture,

this

would

helps

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help

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to

decarse

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decrease

the need to buy new cars that will

pervent

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prevent

from

traffic

jams.