The line graph below shows changes in the amount and the type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarize the information, and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and the type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarize the information, and make comparison where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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provided line graph illustrates that Australian youth ate junk food, but their consumptions were variable based on the kind and the
amount
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of fast food, in the period from 1975 to 2000.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
consumption
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of
hamburgers
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was the highest, in the beginning,
whereas
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the consumed
amount
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of the other two types was the lowest.
To begin
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, in 1975, teenagers consumed a big
amount
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of
hamburgers
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, just 100
times
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per
year
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, which was the greatest
amount
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compared to the others.
Although
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the consumed
amount
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of
hamburgers
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declined gradually to 85
times
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per
year
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, there was a small rise in its
consumption
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between 1978 and 1988,
then
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; it dropped sharply to less than 40
times
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per
year
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, in 2000.
In contrast
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, even though the consumed
amount
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of pizza, fish and chips was the lowest
initially
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, both of them rose dramatically, which reached nearly equal amounts, at about 83 but in a different
year
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. After ,that the
consumption
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of pizza moved steadily and stood, at 83, in 2000, but there was a slight elevation in the
consumption
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of fish and chips, and
then
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it stopped, at 100
times
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per
year
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, which was the starting point for
hamburgers
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, consumption, hamburgers, times, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 7 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • fast food consumption
  • increase
  • decline
  • trend
  • popularity
  • Australian teenagers
  • hamburgers
  • pizza
  • fish and chips
  • steady rise
  • sharp decline
  • comparison
  • amount and type
  • notable changes
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