Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as men's, although they have to sacrififice a lot for their family and career. It is said: "A woman's place is in the home." What do you think?

Although

in recent

time

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, a lot of people is ignoring

women

's talent and

skills

.

However

, they have even better

skills

and dedication than

men

and it can happen only in the

women

's case of sacrificing their career for the wellbeing of the family because of the conventional thoughts about

women

. I personally disagree with the viewpoint that

women

's only job is to

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home. To start with, if we erase the traditional past ideas and perceptions about

women

, we can understand that

women

has

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better

skills

than

men

and in any

sectors

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of life they can perform and shine even better than

men

.

Nonetheless

, their

skills

and

hardworks

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hard work

often remain unrecognizable because it is hardly accepted and appreciated by their male counterparts.

Therefore

,

women

sometimes feel less motivated and even reluctant to

persue

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pursue

their

career

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and explore their

talent

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. Mostly in the rural area

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example,

women

confine themselves in the four walls of home and do not want to participate in the

society

and economy.

However

,

women

's

achievement

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are very rarely celebrated by

men

because the patriarchal

society

always

posseses

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possesses

possess

a dominating attitudes

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towards

women

and they know very well that if

women

have

a

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plenty of opportunities, they can

also

be their better

partner

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not only in real life but

also

in

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society

.

Hence

, they ignore their capabilities and try to demotivate them. In conclusion, we can come to the point that

,

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we should not ignore the capability and interests of

women

to make them

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better and

skilled

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partner

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in

the

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society

.