A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh the drawbacks?
Nowadays, it can be claimed that a growing number of countries suppose that
tourism
is the chief livelihood. On the one hand, there are a number of benefits of this
process, but on the other hand
, there some
drawbacks and issues which must be discussed and solved. In Add a missing verb
are some
this
essay, both sides will be explained and supported with examples.
First of all, speaking about the pluses of tourism
developing, definitely, there are manifold. This
includes economic development, industry
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the industry
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tourism
set
up a lot of workplaces for located people. Wrong verb form
setting
Moreover
, tourists increase traffic
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the traffic
for
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such
as museums, palaces, theaters
and exhibitions. Change the spelling
theatres
Besides
, according to
the statistics, travel
industry contributes to the improvement of infrastructure. Correct article usage
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Government
needs to construct new hotels, create Add an article
The government
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better layout roads, build new museums, parks and cinemas and hold various events, Correct article usage
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for example
, festivals and concerts.
However
, some cons should be mentioned. If a country
has a lot of tourists, it means that it must be ecology problems such
as air pollutions
, deforestation and a large amount of garbage. Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
For instance
, government
needs to have a lot of hotels and vehicles, Add an article
the government
therefore
, nature gets polluted. Moreover
, people will suffer from lack
of work during non-tourist seasons. An article, which was published in the British journal, says that during the absence of a mass flow of tourists, the local population suffers from unemployment and downtime Correct article usage
a lack
various
entertainment. I suppose, that Change preposition
in various
pluses
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the pluses
tourism
do not outweigh the disadvantages, because the environment and the local population of the country
suffer.
In conclusion, the tourism
industry as the country
's main source of income can be both rewarding and problematic. Obviously, it is great that there is economic development which includes which includes
job creation and infrastructure development, but from my point of view, it is terrible when a Remove the redundancy
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country
have
ecological issues and unemployment during the non-tourist period.Change the verb form
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