Many students chose to complete at least some part of their university studies in a foreign country. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad.
Nowadays, foreign
studies
have become moe
popular than it was before. Correct your spelling
more
Therefore
, numerous
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a numerous
the numerous
number of
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apply
students
chose their masters
and Change noun form
master's
phd
program from Correct your spelling
PhD
foreign
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a foreign
the foreign
university
. It seems to me that, Fix the agreement mistake
universities
development
of Correct article usage
the development
this
outcome will open many opportunity
for Change to a plural noun
opportunities
students
with degree
from Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
high ranked
universities.
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high-ranked
To begin
with, United
States and Correct article usage
the United
few
other countries offer Correct article usage
a few
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the worlds
worlds
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world's
top quality
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top-quality
of
higher educational programmes with Change preposition
apply
best
Ivey Correct article usage
the best
league
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League
university
and business schools. Fix the agreement mistake
universities
However
, many students
after completing their under graduate
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undergraduate
studies
from home
college, majority of them going to apply for Correct pronoun usage
their home
further
degree
or certification Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
course
in Fix the agreement mistake
courses
US
, UK or Canada. Correct article usage
the US
In addition
, if we compare state university
to Fix the agreement mistake
universities
other foreign
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another foreign university
other foreign universities
university
, both will either lack proficiency in sort
of education or Correct quantifier usage
some sort
expertises
in providing them. But, foreign Correct your spelling
expertise
country
will provide golden Fix the agreement mistake
countries
opportunity
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opportunities
of
internship Change preposition
for
program
for Fix the agreement mistake
programs
students
. As a result
, many would discover new aspect
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aspects
in
their lives, Change preposition
of
also
benefits after receiving international
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an international
the international
degree
.
On the other hand
, some international programs will need to compete
entrance Add the preposition
forcompete
exam
, whenever Fix the agreement mistake
exams
students
will return after their studies
back to home
county. Correct pronoun usage
their home
Whereas
, medical
field in India and other continents have entrance Add an article
the medical
exam
for international Fix the agreement mistake
exams
students
. If they are willing to get certification
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a certification
the certification
of
Change preposition
in
doctors
training and practices. Change noun form
doctors'
doctor's
For instance
, this
could create some negativity in community
, who will get neglected to practice before proper examination. Correct article usage
the community
For example
, because
international Correct word choice
apply
studies
could differ in various expect from training style to approach in regulation. Yet some fields would still get benefits
of their Correct article usage
the benefits
degree
.
In conclusion, any student with international
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an international
the international
degree
will have high
probability to get a job, in Add an article
a high
compare
to Replace the word
comparison
other individual
. In my opinion, every individual Change the wording
another individual
other individuals
have
their own perspective Change the verb form
has
in
education, but Change preposition
on
foreign
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a foreign
university
with wide
range Add an article
a wide
in
academic programs can outweigh Change preposition
of
disadvantages
.Correct article usage
the disadvantages
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