The office building where you work doesn't have any parking spaces available for employees. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -explain the problem - suggest a solution - say how on-site or nearby parking would benefit employees.
Dear Manager,
I am Raj, working in the management department of our company. I am writing to you with regard to a parking problem faced by myself and my colleagues.
Firstly
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Moreover
, with the augmentation of workers, the
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few days without parking space as a couple of my colleagues had to pay a fine to traffic vigilantes, as they had to keep their vehicle outside our building premises.
May I suggest that, our company should have a separate private parking available for their employees, outside of the building within Correct article usage
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Moreover
, a nearby place to park will help in subsidising the peak hour traffic to park
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, we can work in a comfortable environment.
Yours faithfully,
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.