The graphs below show how people in a European city reached their office and got back home in 1959 and 2009.

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The supplied pie chart gives information on the types of

transportation

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used by employees from their offices to their homes in 1959 and 2009. It is divided into 5 categories including foot, bus, train, car and other. From an

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perspective, foot took the largest proportion in 1959, but in 2009, the car was the most popular

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way was still the least used way. In 1959, the percentage of walking was 45% higher than using cars.

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, in 2009, the percentage of car users increased and it was 10% higher than walking which was at the rate of 25%.People who went by train did not have any changes and it was stable at 15%. Public

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was not very popular at that time and in 1995, there were 15% of passengers who used it .

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, in 2009, it even slightly decreased to 13%. Other types of

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were used only 5% in 1959 , but it increased more than double in 2009 and the rate was 12%.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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170 words

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The graphs below show how people in a European city reached their office and got back home in 1959 and 2009.

some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. others think that adult life brings more happiness ,in spite of greater responsibilites.

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You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have some problems and can’t stay for the whole course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out whether a refund is possible if you leave early

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