You recently received an invitation to a dinner party at your friend's house. Write a letter to accept the invitation. In your letter: - explain why you are accepting the invitation - describe why you are looking forward to the dinner party - offer to bring a dish to share Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses.

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Dear Jane, I am pleased to receive your

dinner

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invitation

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for

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this

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Sunday 25th of July at

Brookleyn

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Brooklyn

Lane. My sincere congratulations to you and

family

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your family

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for the purchase of the new family house. I am delighted to come over for

dinner

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as it has been quite some time

that

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since

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have

Unnecessary verb

apply

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met. After your transfer to Edinburgh, we did not have many opportunities to meet and spend some quality time together. It was really a surprise for me to see you back

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London after 5 years.

Moreover

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, I

also

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heard from our friends that you have invited our entire batch. That’s kind of you. I believe that

this

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can be one of the best chances to meet up with our classmates and do our networking for our volunteer service too. You should be surprised that we have already opened a new chat group to plan

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apply

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the dress code and colour code to match the theme provided by you for the

dinner

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party. Its

great

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a great

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pleasure to renew

our

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the

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bond and friendship that we foster during

university

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our university

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years.

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, it would be ubiquitous for some of us to bring fine wine to the

dinner

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party.

However

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, I am more than happy to whip your favourite food items

such

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as honey wings and buffalo wings as the starters for the night. I am looking forward to your

dinner

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party and it will be a memorable one for us as I am

also

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bringing along my guitar. Music does the magic! ( 40 words) Yours regards Kalai

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

258 words

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