Increasingly, people eat food from other parts of the world rather than local food. What do you think is driving this trend? Is this a good or bad development?

At present, the
trend
of exploring international
cuisines
and
food
from other
culture
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cultures
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rise compared to trying the local
food
. The constant exposure
of
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Internet
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the Internet
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and social media and increasingly affluent society have made remarkable differences
to
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this
proliferating
trend
. The essay will discuss the factors that drive
this
trend
as well as
the benefits of the development.
Firstly
, the easy access to
internet
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and social media have given
the
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constant exposure to different
culture
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cultures
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and traditions covering the
cuisines
too. A significant number of people especially youngsters are attracted and curious to explore various ethnic
food
and practices.
For instance
, the
food
blogger Irfan from Chennai has garnered
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followers
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to
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his
food
vlog videos where he travels to different countries to equip people with knowledge on various
food
items and
the
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cuisines
.
This
trend
provides
plethora
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of benefits to the tourism industry by attracting millions of visitors to travel.
In addition
, the
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technology and readily available information on websites
exacerbate
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the interest of many to explore and taste.
Secondly
, the increasing affluence of
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society can be another factor to look forward to
explore
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and
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on international
cuisines
compared to local
food
which is ubiquitous everywhere. As we all know Singapore
being
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the
food
paradise in Asia,
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tourists are
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drawn to the number of restaurants there. To epitome, the
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restaurants and
five star
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hotels in Singapore provide
wide
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range of international buffets and
array
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an array
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of local
food
items from all over the world to entice the hungry crowd. The melting pot of local
culture
in Singapore is
also
of utmost importance to build good
bond
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and
friendship
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friendships
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with others. To recapitulate, the support for local
food
as well as
the exploration of international cuisine fetch benefits to both people and
country
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. By embracing different ethnic groups from other countries and local
culture
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cultures
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, we can build a sustainable future in
this
shrinking world.
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