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Fossil fuel, such as coal, oil, and natural gas, is extensively used in many countries that cause harm to the environment. The use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, however, is being encouraged in many countries. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Fossil fuel, namely coal, oil, and natural gas, is
widespread
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 utilized in many nations that cause adverse to the ecosystem . The use of renewable
sources
 of
energy
, like wind and solar power,
however
, is being encouraged in many nations. In my opinion,
encourage
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encouraging
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 employ
the
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apply
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alternative
sources
 of
energy
 is a positive development because it
contribute
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contributes
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 to
mitigate
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mitigating
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environmenal
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environmental
 crisis, and
provide
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provides
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 jobs for
people
.
To begin
 with, there are several reasons why I believe
incentivize
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incentivising
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of
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apply
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using
the
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non-conventional
sources
 of
energy
 is a positive trend.
Firstly
, renewable
energy
soruces
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sources
contribute to
alleviate
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alleviating
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 the Co2 footprint on the atmosphere.
This
 is because renewable
energy
work
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works
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 based
in
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on
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 sunlight or wind, which means these natural
resoruces
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resources
 do not have
the
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detrimetnal
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detrimental
impacts on the environment.
In contrast
 , fossil fuel,
such
 as coal, oil, and natural gas
relases
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release
a huge
a
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amonut
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amount
 of Co2
emssions
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emissions
.
Consequently
, non-conventional
energy
soruces
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sources
 will contribute to
mitigate
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mitigating
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the
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apply
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environmental issues namely, climate change, global warming, and
raising seal
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rising sea
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 levels, because these environmental issues result
of
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in
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increase
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the increase
an increase
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of
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in
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amount
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the amount
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 of greenhouse gases
in
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on
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 the earth.
Moreoever
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Moreover
, renewable
energy
 assist to improve
people
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people's
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 health.
This
 is because
the
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apply
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most
of
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apply
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serious diseases
such
 as
,
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 cancer,
asthma
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and asthma
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 result
of
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from
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 air pollution.
provide
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Providing
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 jobs opportunity and income for local
people
 is another advantage of using alternative
sources
 of
energy
. To illustrate, more companies will invest money in renewable
energy
 projects means more
people
 will work as,
engieers
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engineers
,
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and labors
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labors
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labourers
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.
Therefore
,
encourage
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encouraging
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use
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the use
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 of alternative
sources
 of
energy
 will assist to reduce the rate of poverty and crime in society.
To sum up
, I believe
encourage
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encouraging
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use
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the use
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non-conventional
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of non-conventional
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sources
 of
energy
 is a positive development in both
ecosytem
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ecosystem
as well as
community
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the community
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 because it
tackle
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tackles
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the
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apply
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environmental degradation
such
 as
,
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apply
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 climate change, global warming,
raising
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and raising
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seal
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sea
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 levels.
In addition
, it
provide
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provides
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 jobs for individuals
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