The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods, rice, wheat and maize, by people in four different countries

The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods, rice, wheat and maize, by people in four different countries
The table illustrates the consumption of three staple food including
rice
,
wheat
and
maize
by people in four nations.
It is clear that
Cambodian consume the biggest amount of
rice
,
while
most people in Egypt eat
wheat
.
However
,polishes do not use
maize
in their meal. We can see that there are 1445
calories
in the consumption of
rice
in Cambodia,
while
the eats of
calories
from
rice
in Poland and Mexico are 19 and 57
calories
.
Additionally
,Egypt has the highest intake of
calories
from
wheat
is 1095
calories
followed by Poland with 865
calories
.Meanwhile,the people of Cambodia have the lowest amount of
calories
from
wheat
just 18
calories
.
While
the majority of
calories
from
maize
consumed by Mexico is 1083
calories
, there are no
calories
in the consumption of
calories
from
maize
in Poland, the figure
calories
consumed by Mexico is 5 times as many as that Cambodia
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