The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods, rice, wheat and maize, by people in four different countries
The table illustrates the consumption of three staple food including
rice
,wheat
and maize
by people in four nations.
It is clear that
Cambodian consume the biggest amount of rice
,while
most people in Egypt eat wheat
.However
,polishes do not use maize
in their meal.
We can see that there are 1445 calories
in the consumption of rice
in Cambodia,while
the eats of calories
from rice
in Poland and Mexico are 19 and 57 calories
.Additionally
,Egypt has the highest intake of calories
from wheat
is 1095 calories
followed by Poland with 865 calories
.Meanwhile,the people of Cambodia have the lowest amount of calories
from wheat
just 18 calories
.
While
the majority of calories
from maize
consumed by Mexico is 1083 calories
, there are no calories
in the consumption of calories
from maize
in Poland, the figure calories
consumed by Mexico is 5 times as many as that CambodiaSubmitted by anhnguhongmai on
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