The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods, rice, wheat and maize, by people in four different countries
The table illustrates the consumption of three staple food including
rice
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wheat
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maize
by people in four nations.
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It is clear that
Cambodian consume the biggest amount of Linking Words
rice
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while
most people in Egypt eat Linking Words
wheat
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However
,polishes do not use Linking Words
maize
in their meal.
We can see that there are 1445 Use synonyms
calories
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rice
in Cambodia,Use synonyms
while
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in Poland and Mexico are 19 and 57 Use synonyms
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Additionally
,Egypt has the highest intake of Linking Words
calories
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wheat
is 1095 Use synonyms
calories
followed by Poland with 865 Use synonyms
calories
.Meanwhile,the people of Cambodia have the lowest amount of Use synonyms
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just 18 Use synonyms
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.
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While
the majority of Linking Words
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consumed by Mexico is 1083 Use synonyms
calories
, there are no Use synonyms
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maize
in Poland, the figure Use synonyms
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consumed by Mexico is 5 times as many as that CambodiaUse synonyms
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