You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter •explain why you think you would be suitable for the job •say what else you could do for the family •give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...............,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to an advertisement looking for a
language
teacher to teach two children for a year. I am a resident of Melbourne City and I am currently pursuing a major in Electronics and Communication Engineering at a university. I would like to highlight the fact that Telugu is my mother tongue and I have been speaking
this
language
since my childhood.
Additionally
, I
also
have a
language
proficiency certificate in Telugu. I am offering lessons at a cheaper price compared to other teachers.
In addition
to that, I can
also
recommend your children to the International
language
competition and it can give them a lot of opportunities to make a career in the future.
Furthermore
, I can
also
help your children with mathematics for free of cost and it can save you some money as you need not find a separate teacher. It would be really helpful if you give me
this
job as it could help me to support my university studies. I could use the money earned to purchase books and pay rent
while
I stay in Australia. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sahithi
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
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  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
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  • despite

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