The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make where relevancto.
The given diagram depicts the steps and the facilities needed in producing matches.
Overall
, the process demands 10 steps before being manufactured to
the public.
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Initially
, the wood log will be rolling around with a blade underneath to peel, which creates the veneer. Then
it will be chopped into equal parts which then
will be soaked into a tank
filled with ammonium phosphate in a period of time. After that, these sticks will be dried, the next step is
to put them in a hopper where all the metal duct will be blown away, then
the wooden sticks will be put in a storage area and Correct word choice
and then
then
set in a conveyor.
After being inserted, the sticks will be put in line by the perforated steel belt which sends them through the paraffin wax tank
, followed by the based chemical tank
and the tip chemical tank
. Next,
the matches will be dried out before being put into packages and sent to every store.Submitted by boocheapofficial on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tank with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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