Some people believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Salary is an issue that many
people
have strong opinions about, and the pay gap between top entertainers and sports
stars on the one
hand, and professionals in vital service
sectors such
as medicine and education on the other, have been quite controversial for sometime
now. Replace the word
some time
However
, I personally think that, except in certain cases, the latter the
group do not necessarily deserve higher pay than the former. Correct article usage
apply
One
reason is that the cash flow of service
sectors is significantly lower than that of Correct article usage
the service
sports
and entertainment industries. Correct article usage
the sports
People
willingly spend trillions of dollars every year buying tickets to sports
matches, concerts and movies, while
the revenue in service
sectors like education or medicine originates mainly from households in need of their services. And even then
, those services have to be provided at a discount to guarantee proper access for all citizens regardless of their financial status. This
means that the funds available to service
providers like doctors or teachers is
a fraction of what is available to Change the verb form
are
sports
stars, actors and singers. Additionally
, unlike in sports
and entertainment where people
with certain talents are chosen or may accidentally be discovered and hurled into stardom, people
in service
professions tend to make informed choices regarding their careers. In other words
, one
usually chooses to become a teacher or doctor, knowing how much one
can hope to earn and what the chances of living a life of luxury are for someone in their business. (70 words) That being said, there are certain professionals that
truly deserve to receive salaries higher than, or at least as high as, those paid to celebrity players or entertainers. Correct pronoun usage
who
This
includes doctors who make breakthrough medical discoveries, invent novel methods to cure diseases or make other substantial contributions to medical sciences. Likewise
, contributions such
as developing more effective teaching approaches should warrant celebrity-level wages for educators who make them. In conclusion, I do not believe that doctors or educators should receive higher wages than celebrity singers, sports
players or actors unless they have made significant contributions to their fields.Submitted by zahratoroghiofficial on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion