You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: •explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months •say how your work could be done while you are away •ask for his/her help in arranging it Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, After greetings, I am writing

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letter to you with regard to my request of spending a short period of time approximately six months working in the company's head office in Saudi Arabia.

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, I am looking forward to

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a wide range of experience from working there.

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, I would like to participate in some complicated processes which take place in our head office,

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I will be able to develop my skills and be promoted in a short period of time.

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, with regard to my

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here, I could proceed my work online, monitoring the inventory, preparing monthly reports, and answering all clients' inquiries.

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, my colleagues in the accounting department will carry out some of my tasks during my absence.

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, I will be appreciated

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you help me in arranging it and if you accept

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to ease some difficulties I would face to get

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opportunity. I am waiting for your kind reply. Yours sincerely, John Adam

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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