Some people believe that children should study all subjects at school, while others think they should only study subjects they are good at or find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
more and more people reckon that juveniles have to learn whole school courses. employee who speaks
however
, others argue that they should only teach subjects
they are enjoying in
and that they find themself in. Change preposition
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believe that young students at that age should explore all Change the capitalization
I
subjects
. then
, they will know which subject attracts them more.
on the one hand, several people think that they should follow contemporary education method
. which is to allow the children to choose what he good in only. in fact, Fix the agreement mistake
methods
this
method is not effective. as, the young student doesn't aware of what is most appropriate for him and mostly, children are tending to choose the things which bring a happy feeling. for instance
, a study published at New York University recently concluded that most of
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young students at Correct article usage
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age Correct determiner usage
the
90
per cent are choosing the wrong option. Change preposition
of 90
therefore
, all educational options must be obligated.
on the other hand
, other people argue that juveniles must learn all courses. as,
is really crucial to be aware of all Remove the comma
apply
subjects
and discover what they are really good in
and what they Change preposition
at
are deserve
in the future. Change the verb form
deserve
in other words
, exploring the whole subject also
give
them sufficient information about everything around them. Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
As a
result
they will in a good understanding level in every course core. Add a comma
,result
for example
, In ,China they commit young children to learn English
language. Change the article
the English
As a result
about 90 per cent of Chinese able to speak English fluently. moreover
, this
is a kind of merit, because major occupation seeking forAdd an article
an
the
English
language.
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To conclude
, in my opinion, I reckon all subjects
must be obligatory as It is really significant to commit the young pupil to explore all subjects
initially
. then
, when he grows he will find the real course he wants to engage.
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subjects
are beneficial but in the future. since the young person doesn't has sufficient experience to choose what is best for him.Submitted by aliaelarabi5 on
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