During a recent plane journey,you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants.You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman.In your letter Remind him when and where you met Tell him what kind of job you are interested in Say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Sir, I am writing to you because we met in
the
fight Correct article usage
a
that
I Correct word choice
when
sit
next to you, so you gave Wrong verb form
sat
to
me a business card and Change preposition
apply
also
offered me a possible job in your restaurant. I am pretty excited about this
opportunity because since I was a child, I have been
dreamed Unnecessary verb
apply
to work
in a restaurant. I am finishing my degree in gastronomy and I have been searching for an opportunity to work in a restaurant as a chef. I strongly believe that I am a great person for Change preposition
of working
this
job because I have been studying and improving my skills to be prepared for this
moment. I have studied for three years in Germany learning the best recipes in the world. I won the Master Chef TV program the last
year with delicious rice. If have any concerns, please let me know, so I am totally available to you. Please contact me with the number on my curriculum vitae. Your faithfully SandraSubmitted by nazirovmuhammad71 on
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.