The table provides a breakdown by selected costing over the next five years in American currency for three environmental groups for sustainable forestry.
The table provides a breakdown by selected costing over the next five years in American currency for three environmental groups for sustainable forestry. The pie chart
illustrate
the expected spending breakdown allocation for the first year as the projects are set up.
As can be seen from the table, the environmental plans for safety forest Change the verb form
illustrates
area
will grow up substantially in south-east Asia than Fix the agreement mistake
areas
Change preposition
in west
west
Africa and Central America. In 5 years west Africa will have 3.5 million dollars,Capitalize word
West
while
central
America will have 5 million bills. Capitalize word
Central
Gradual
increase will be in South-East Asia with Add an article
A gradual
environmental
plan that Add an article
an environmental
the environmental
consist
Change the verb form
consists
50
million.
The pie chart shows that salaries will consist just under half in Change preposition
of 50
first
year of Change the article
the first
expenditure
program.Nearly Correct article usage
the expenditure
one third
will be set up costs. The vast majority comparison versus the same indicator Add a hyphen
one-third
half
twenty Add a missing verb
is half
percent
for training and office expenses.
Change the spelling
per cent
Overall
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