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The table provides a breakdown by selected costing over the next five years in American currency for three environmental groups for sustainable forestry.

The table provides a breakdown by selected costing over the next five years in American currency for three environmental groups for sustainable forestry.
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The table provides a breakdown by selected costing over the next five years in American currency for three environmental groups for sustainable forestry. The pie chart
illustrate
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 the expected spending breakdown allocation for the first year as the projects are set up. As can be seen from the table, the environmental plans for safety forest
area
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areas
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 will grow up substantially in south-east Asia than
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in west
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west
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West
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 Africa and Central America. In 5 years west Africa will have 3.5 million dollars,
while
central
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 America will have 5 million bills.
Gradual
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 increase will be in South-East Asia with
environmental
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an environmental
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 plan that
consist
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50
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of 50
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 million. The pie chart shows that salaries will consist just under half in
first
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 year of
expenditure
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the expenditure
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 program.Nearly
one third
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 will be set up costs. The vast majority comparison versus the same indicator
half
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is half
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 twenty
percent
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per cent
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 for training and office expenses.
Overall
 the environmental projects for sustainable forestry will be completed in 5 years
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