Some people say that protecting the environment governments responsibility. Other believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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,
me
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it is the
government
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reponsiblility
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responsibility
as well as
every
individuals
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individual
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reponsible
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responsible
to
protecte
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protect
the environment. So,
i
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strongly
belive
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then
every body
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everybody
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should protect. My viewpoint
is discusses
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in
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blow
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below
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. My opinion is
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in
blow
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data.
Firstly
, the nation is there
there
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to protect nature
as well as
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the publice
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publice
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public
.
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then
it will give
also
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for the states. If
NGO
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NGOs
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will get support
by
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the states
then
they can work more hard and can become easy and fast from them. If the groups will plant
atleast
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at least
one
trees
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per month
then
it would
better
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for the nation.
Person
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should plant more and more to make
green
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a green
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city.
Secondly
, it
even
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the public
responsibe
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responsible
for taking care of nature.
Thirdly
, if
both
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nation and the public
then
it will be good for
both
.
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, if only the country will take care
about
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a
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trees
than
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then
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it will be just half good for the community but,
both
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than
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then
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it will get
more
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more
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benefits to the
trees
. The country should make
role
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roles
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like per person there should be one
trees
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tree
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.
NGO
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NGOs
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should spend aware
about
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importance
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the importance
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.
To conclude
,
hence
, from the blow information it can be said that
both
people
as well as
the government responsibility to take care about
a the
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environment.
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, it can be said
both
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is
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needed. From my viewpoint, my opinion is that
both
should work equally.
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