Some people say that protecting the environment governments responsibility. Other believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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, me
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apply
government
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government's
reponsiblility
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responsibility
as well as
every individuals
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individual
reponsible
to Correct your spelling
responsible
protecte
the environment. So, Correct your spelling
protect
i
strongly Change the capitalization
I
belive
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believe
then
every body
should protect. My viewpoint Correct your spelling
everybody
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is discussed
in
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apply
blow
. My opinion is Correct your spelling
below
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discussed
blow
data.
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the blow
Firstly
, the nation is there there
to protect nature Remove the redundancy
apply
as well as
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the publice
publice
. Correct your spelling
public
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it will give also
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for the states. If Correct your spelling
good
NGO
will get support Fix the agreement mistake
NGOs
by
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from
then
they can work more hard and can become easy and fast from them. If the groups will plant atleast
one Correct your spelling
at least
trees
per month Change to a singular noun
tree
then
it would better
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be better
Person
should plant more and more to make Fix the agreement mistake
People
green
city.
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a green
the green
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the public Add a missing verb
is even
responsibe
for taking care of nature. Correct your spelling
responsible
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will job together the
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for the
then
it will be good for both
. For example
, if only the country will take care about
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of
a
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apply
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it will be just half good for the community but, Correct your spelling
then
both
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it will get Correct your spelling
then
more
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apply
more
benefits to the Remove the redundancy
apply
trees
. The country should make role
like per person there should be one Fix the agreement mistake
roles
trees
. Change to a singular noun
tree
NGO
should spend aware Fix the agreement mistake
NGOs
about
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of
importance
.
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the importance
To conclude
, hence
, from the blow information it can be said that both
people as well as
the government responsibility to take care about a the
environment. Choose an article
the
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, it can be said both
are responsive Correct word choice
and is
is
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