Write a letter to ur frnd to inform about the celebration you are having for a recet job promotion. Include information abou The promotion The celebration Their accomodation
Hello Aman,
I hope you doing well. It is so long since we
last
get
together Wrong verb form
got
finally
the day is coming. I have a good news
for you, if you remember Remove the article
good news
a piece of good news
i
told you that Change the capitalization
I
i
am in stress Change the capitalization
I
due to
work
Wrong verb form
working
for
Change preposition
on
new
project in my company. Add an article
a new
the new
Finally
, hard work
pays off, me and my team work
together to accomplished
the target and complete the project Change the form of the verb
accomplish
with in
time.
Correct your spelling
within
Due to
this
hard work
Add a comma
,work
me
and my team Change the pronoun
I
was
Change the verb form
were
appriciated
in Correct your spelling
appreciated
board
meeting and Add an article
a board
the board
i
got promotion Change the capitalization
I
as
director of Change preposition
to
Correct article usage
the opration
opration
of Correct your spelling
operation
operations
company
. Correct article usage
the company
Therefore
, i
planned a weekend party in my guest house in Miami, you are warmly invited. Change the capitalization
I
However
, i
recently renovate that house and the upper portion is Change the capitalization
I
comletly
changed and you will love to stay there for 2 nights Correct your spelling
completely
whereas
i
will stay on Change the capitalization
I
first
floor.
Hope to see you there and waiting for your reply.
Change the article
the first
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
Preet.Correct your spelling
Yours
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite