Some people think governments should ban dangerous sports. Others, however, say people have the freedom to make their own decisions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different views on whether administrators ought to prohibit dangerous

sports

.

While

there are many reasons to forbid that exercise, I do believe that

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can choose the

sports

which they like. On the one hand, that behaviours will put people in danger, so governments have to prohibit them.

To begin

with, perilous activity is harmful to personal safety.

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lost

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because of their ability or

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natural environment.

Secondly

, few people want to try the activity. Most of

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always put the security at

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place.

In addition

,

although

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perilous

sports

are banned, there are

also

many exercises

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be chosen by

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.

On the other hand

, there are some advantages behind the hazard campaigns are allowed.

Firstly

, the choice which can be chosen become more and more because

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exercises is popularized.

Furthermore

, the competition of

that is

more exciting and stimulating. It is beneficial to develop

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Commercialization.

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, Red Bull, a functional drinks company, always

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the player to finish a stunt bike video for their popularity.

Additionally

, athletes who play in danger can lightly handle

with

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difficult

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. In conclusion, I can understand the reason why individuals tip the balance in favour of banning

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activity but I would argue that

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can benefit more from the permit of dangerous

sports

.