You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course at a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admission tutor. In your letter, • explain your position • apologize and offer to come on another day or later the same day • also ask how long the interview will be, and whether there will be any tests during it

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inform you about my unavailability on the day of my

interview

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at your College. First and foremost, I am very sorry that I am changing my plan at the

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moment. Actually, I got a job offer from a multinational company and have to attend an

interview

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over there as it is a very big opportunity for me and do not want to lose it. Since the

interview

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is going to be held on 18th of July at 3:00 p.m. and the timings of both interviews are clashing, I will be unable to comply with the date you require my presence on. I would appreciate it if you could provide me with another meeting slot for the next day or for the afternoon of the same day. I will be able to manage my schedule and reach on time since I would like to be a part of an

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, I apologize for the inconvenience I have caused you.

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, I would like to know a few details related to an upcoming

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between us. Is there going to be any test or quiz?

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, how long the

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will be? I am inquiring so that I prepare myself

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in advance. I am very excited to study my course at

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very College as it is like a dream come true. Hope to get a positive response from your side. Yours faithfully, Jack Richard

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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