The two maps below show and island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps show the difference before and after several facilities were constructed on the
island
.
From the overview, it is crystal clear that before the construction, there were merely trees living on the island
, and the beach had existed since initially
. Furthermore
, trees still remained after the construction.
To begin
with, several accommodations were built on the land, and they were separated into two villages, with a reception being built in the centre, which was surrounded by a vehicle track. There was a restaurant above the reception, and all buildings were connected by footpath.
As for the sea, a pier was added after the construction on the south of the island
. The beach which was located on east north of the island
was
remained, with an area that provided people to swim just outside it was added.Unnecessary verb
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