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The plans below show the layout of a university's sport centre now, and how it will lokk after redevlopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reposting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given maps illustrate the structure of a university’s
sport
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sports
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center
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centre
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 in the present, and how it will appear in the future.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that there will be additional
sport
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sports
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 rooms and public
facilities
 to build.
In contrast
, outdoor courts will
be
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apply
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dissappear
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disappear
 and
changes
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change
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 into other
facilities
. Looking at the information in more detail, there
is
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are
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 no significant changes in the
center
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centre
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 area of
university
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the university
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 sports centre where the locations of a changing room, a pool, a seating area, a gym, and a receptionist are still the same in the exact place.
Although
, the gym will be enlarged to the east.
In addition
, there are two
facilities
will
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which will
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 be built near the reception, which are a sports shop and a cafe both
are
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located in the
south west
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southwest
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 and
south east
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southeast
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 building respectively. As
regard
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 to the new
facilities
. West outdoor courts will change into a leisure pool with a changing room connected.
Furthermore
, outdoor courts in the east part
also
 change to some
sport
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sports
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 rooms. A
sport
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sports
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 hall is located in the centre near the seating area and two dance studios will
located
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be located
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in
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on
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 the edge of
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the north
a north
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north east
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northeast
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 part.
Finally
, there is a changing room will build in the corner of
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the south
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south east
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south-east
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 building.
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