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The table below shows the water usage for different purposes in six different countries in 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the water usage for different purposes in six different countries in 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 table depicts
water
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 consumption for different reasons in six
countries
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 in 2001.It is clear from the graph that the most
usage
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 for
water
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 in Russia is 1663 m3 used for agriculture
while
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 the least used in China for domestic 26 m3.
According to
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 what is shown,all
countries
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 show the same behaviour in the consumption of
water
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 which all of them consumed the most
amount
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 of
water
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 for agricultural purposes, in Australia and Canada the most
usage
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 purpose is for agricultural 741 and 1238 respectively
while
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 the least
usage
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 in Australia is industrial 275 and in Canada is 279 m3. China and Russia consumed the most
water
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 in agriculture with 605 and 1663 respectively .
Moreover
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, China consumed the least
amount
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 of
water
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 among all the different six
countries
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 with 26 m3.Turkey and UK
also
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 show the same behaviour the
usage
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 of
water
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 was the most in agriculture
while
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 the least
amount
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 of
water
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 consumed is for domestic 80 and 38 respectively.
To sum up
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. It is apparent that all of the six
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 consumed the most
amount
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 of
water
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 for agricultural purposes followed by industrial.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, countries, usage, m, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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