The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
In given chart display about the species used for animal testing in the U.S. The distribution is given blow. There have been 6 animals used for tests.
Firstly
, the highest used
of
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animal is rabbits 38.7%. For testing prepose hamsters are used for 27.7% of 10.2% is the usage of dogs.
Secondly
, the lowest used bird is sheep.
Thirdly
, primates and pigs are used equally about 9% and 9.3%. The use of sheep is used very less compare to other species
as well as
the highest use of rabbits. The use of pigs and promotes is almost simpler. The dogs are used more and less
also
. In
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conclusion, the above data and information
describes
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the usage of species for testing in the U.S.
Hence
, the below data describe only 6 animals. The 6 animals are used differently and some are used more for testing and some are used very less.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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