The graph below shows consumers’ average annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed-line and services in America between 2001 and 2010.

The graph below shows consumers’ average annual expenditure on cell phone,

national and international fixed-line and services in America between 2001 and 2010.
The line graph, covering a ten-year period from 2001 to 2010 depicts the yearly expense of three types of service in the US.
Overall
, it is evident from the supplied information that cell phone convocation witnessed dramatic growth,
while
there was a downward trend in national
fixed-line
convocation during the period of the question. In detail, the figure for cell phone
services
initially
stood at 200
million
which was the lowest of the three types of service.
By contrast
, national
fixed-line
services
were in first place with an amount of 700
million
.
Moreover
, cell phone
services
experience an approximately four times increase during the decade and took over the place of national
fixed-line
in 2006 with around 500
million
.
In addition
, the figure for national
fixed-line
services
diminished considerably to 400
million
and end up in second place. There was a slight increase in international
fixed-line
services
from 2001 to 2003 and reached its peak of 330
million
in 2003. After that, it levelled out at 310
million
for the rest of seven years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fixed-line, services, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • annual
  • fixed-line services
  • consumer preferences
  • technological advancements
  • economic factors
  • speculate
  • trends
  • notable change
  • shifts in consumer behavior
  • innovation
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