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The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart gives information about the proportions of six types of animals, say,
rabbits
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, hamsters, dogs, pigs, primates and sheep, employed by scientific and medical tests in America.
Overall
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, it is obvious that all experimental subjects are mammals, in which
rabbits
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 account for the biggest share
while
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 sheep is the least popular one in experiments. In experimental tests, 38.7% of them select
rabbits
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 as testing objectives, ranking first among all species, which,
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, is followed by hamsters, at 27.7%.
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, the figure for sheep is only 5.1%, recording the lowest number on the pie chart. The percentage of the left three species combined only comes in at approximately 30%, which is higher than that of
rabbits
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, yet lower than the number of hamsters. To be specific, 10.2% of testing targets are used by dogs,
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 the percentages of pigs and primates merely stand at 9.3% and 9% respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words rabbits with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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